Mordoz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pinwheel]

very nice. I like it =^.^=

First to SergerantJoe : Um I suspect the goggles person IS a guy. The maker of this animation is female, and young. So I would guess that like many young girls, enjoy the viewing and creating of "yaoi" that of male bonding or romance. Its more common a fantasy than one might think.
Especially in Japan, where that word originated. Hey and why not? WE guys got our lesbian thing going for us in fantasy. Although for women, it's more about the romacne than only the sex.

Personally I don't see the draw...it just means the one fantasizing it doesn't get to join in the fun. lol

For amdrangongirl:
If I'm wrong and its a flat-chested, short-haired girl, then I apologize, (nice nice btw) But ifI'm right, I aplaud bringing some of that into newgrounds.
Either way , great work!

I really like how you animated this. Very simple design and concept yet delivered in a cute and light-hearted way. It felt like a storybook.

[Killing the Beast]

ok not bad for a start

Wow what a lazy teacher you have. I would never have my students send their work to this site. That makes no sense at all.

Considering many unfinished works end up blamed into the grave. And most all reviews are rarely constructive at all. Mostly jsut biased opinons stated as fact.

Submissions should only be done when the animator feels it to be done, not forced like that. so messed up.

On the other hand, if you wanted to finish this, this unfinished work will provide a contrast to your final work, perhaps allowing people to appreciate it more.

Its a good start to a rough work in progress. Keep at it and it will be great.

Just a question...even if you poke a arrow into the eye of a whale..that rally wouldn't kill it...cripple it , make it not see you ..that's about it and what did hat gentle sky whale ever do to that guy? lol Questions because it is an interesting idea. I would love to see the story behind that small scene. Is the whale evil? Is it being hunted for meat to feed his village? what? Yes, so many questions indeed lol

anyway great start. i look forward to any more completed work you do. I'd love to see this more refined , less rough. That is if you have the drive anymore for finishing it. I understand very well that being pushed into something can make the work less fun.

7/10 means so far so good, 3/5 means I like what I see , lets see more :)

[Astromiau EP 01]

Yaaaaay! =^T^=

Oh that was a big blast to see this...I was expecting something complrelty lame, but I was so wrong about hat! very awesome work man.

[Waiting for Tom]

lol

So let me get this straight. Tom doesn't delegate at all? It's ALL on his massive shoulders? No no this is not right! He needs lackeys to help out with the huge burden (so he can get back to his chicks) Then both are happy skippy!

Fun animation. Indeedie doo.

LazyMuffin responds:

He's sort of like Hitler, not letting anyone get TOO close, make big desicions.
Thanks.

[Madness: Ascend]

Wow. Simply wow.

I was begining to avoid most all madness anything lately, getting sick of boring sameness everywhere....until now.

This short was awesome in its exception and timing as well as the smooth movements. Made me kind of look past it being the madness variety style and had me looking deeper ..very good story, very good everything...anything bad would merely be nitpicking based on preference. No point doing that.

Superbly done!

Pegosho responds:

Thanks mordoz! That was one of my goals, make a Madness flash with a story and different perspective (not the same 2d stuff).

[Good Taste]

what

I was all like, "I wanna blam this stuff!" but then i saw the little zim doggie about to rape the gold ankh thingy and I was like..."oh yeah, all the points now!"

yum. *slurp!*

5/5 10/10 plus all my lint in my pocket and all my dried semen in my boxers :P

IvysaurClock responds:

OH BOY NEWGROUNDS

[Madness Invasion]

wow surprisingly awesome!

Ah this was a nice change of pace to the overly dull madness fight-fests that end up blended together with the original..dull dull dull.

Yours was pleasantly light-hearted and didn't take it so seriously like many others have. Thinking outside the box really helps.

all points to you!

P.Ss. also tipping my hat as well :-P

[... for Sister]

Great work

First,

Awesome effort, I like the direction. The "camera" movements were slightly dizzying, but not a real problem as I understood where you were going with that.

The voice was hard to understand at first, but then I noticed it was an accent not badly said words. So i got used it it and understood better. I watched a second time to get what I didn't understand at first . I would suggest other viewers try that if they cant get past the accent...it takes time for us to adjust to it sometimes.

Great story, a real tragedy with small sprouts of hope which end in more tragedy. So sad, but that's how life is sometimes.

If I may make a suggestion, perhaps you can continue the story? See how he copes and continues with his life. After all, there is no real end, just new beginnings.

Awesome story there. Very nice first submission 5/10

I hope to see more in the near future :-)
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The rest is for two reviewers below me:

@Anubes - Not everyone can speak English clearly. If you expect perfect in life, you will always be dissapointed. If you listen carefully, you can pick up enough to get the idea of what is being said. Obviously the speaker is not practiced in English and should not be penalized for not being perfect. It is a clear voice, just has a very thick accent. And the quality was great. Your expectations again are too high. Don't compare Hollywood quality with what you see on this site. You would be dissapointed every time. The actual animation , as much of this site has is called Limited Animation. Meaning fewer inbetweens than you might find in an animated full feature movie in a theater. A little more inbetweens will make it tv quality. But here it is fine. A great effort and story placed. For someone who has never submitted anything, you are very harsh. Lighten up a bit maybe.

@KyuubiT - Man, really? Your flashes are pretty rookie too...I'd say that the site itself consists of 90% rookie efforts...that's how the great animators start out. Its like telling someone they are a noob...pointless..we all start out inexperienced and do better as time and efforts go on. Plus thisd is the guys first submission, maybe his first flash ever. So maybe give him a break huh?

But I agree mostly on what you said for the rest. Good scoring. I , myself score based on both story, quality in EFFORTS (also base done past work VS current progress) I'm an animation teacher and deal mostly with 3d animation so I don't work in flash much. but I may someday submit something. Maybe. We'll see lol

[School 13 - TongueTied]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....

*deep breath)...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aw!

So sweet! Awesome work as always!

Very cute mini story and what a reward for saving a girls tongue! hehe