Mordoz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Generic Protagonist #2]

Wubbbaaadubapth

I tried to press 0! I KNEW this was shit, BUT for some reason I couldnt! AAAAh !

I dont know wha-wy but this is good! but its shit..but no its good!

so confused.

Ther ya goes:
*hands you a 10 and 10 hands and 12 waffles ....of death!*

drodZILiA responds:

Okay?

[Nap]

This is a fucking GEM!

Wow. Just wow! Very awesome! A true epic journey, epic being correctly used in this animation. This was a pleasure to watch. Much fun!

All points to you! 5/5 10/10

-Mordoz

Spillkaidah responds:

woo hoo! thanks for the five!

[Maskerade Bawl]

haha! nice!

This is a great one! I like the paper cutout effect too.

I really dont have any criticisms on this one. But I have positives.

* Short and simple.
*Good use of motion
* Gas mask guy, I don't know who hes supposed to be, but makes you feel like you should know, like "oh that rascal is at it again!" lol
* Just fun :)

All points are yours!
5/5 10/10

[Vase Pawwwnch!!!]

fun fun fun!

I saw both versions...I liked yours more.

5/5 9/10

Jam-Jar responds:

Wow :D
Thanks

[Everydevil - Episode 1]

errrr, you tried.

Well, first off youtube hits are merely people who visit that particular video. It is no indication of if they like it or not. Looks for the "likes"

Also just because people like something, doesn't mean its of quality or even good at all.

Instead a good way to see if your stuff is good is to compare to very popular cartoons on tv networks. Yes some crap is there too. but most of it is of some decent quality.

Unfortunately, yours isn't. It looks very much like the doodles of middle school students.

Also another thing is length is no indicator of quality. There will always be someone who complains of it being too short or too long. That's preference. Cant please everyone all the time.

Just like first impressions when meeting someone, you must show your best work. If this was your best work, you have much more improvements to go. But as with all first animations, quality usually improves as well as story and pacing. So im not all that concerned about it.

I tell my animation students to focus mostly on the pacing of the animation, the smoothness of the motions and the importance of writing a script (story) that actually makes sense to more than just themselves. Yours seems fact-paced, mostly voice driven with only the visuals following the voice instead of allowing the animation tell the story. There was no change of the speed, just plowing ahead into it without taking a breath.

All of this makes for a confusing and annoying experience.

For the flash presentation itself, you really need to include the bare basics like a start up screen and allow the movie to end with a replay button or back to main screen. This also adds to the first impression.

I will definitely keep an eye out for your work progression. As long as you don't quite and always aspire to always improve rather than doing "good enough" then I'm sure you'll gain a real following and not just hits.

1/5 3/10

[Naruto Clash]

^_^

Yay for copyrighted sources! wheee! (jk i know its a fan work)

But seriously not bad for sprite animation...
Im curious, did you animate the moves or did the sprite sheet already have that in place? Either way it takes time and effort.

I really like that anime.

ninjaflashboy responds:

nah sprite sheet basicaly had all the moves in but altering them and swaping few frames round gives you differences

[--Orange--]

Wow!

Wow

well animated while staying simple...great job!

All the points are belong to you.

zig. :P

[Hamburger Moon 2]

awesome!

Honestly, the first one really sucked to me.

But this second one made up for the first's crapfest.

This one was actually fun entertainment and pretty much sums up my opinion of the sailor scouts.

All the points are yours!

[minecraft - the only game]

Durrrrrrrrrr..

This one might not make it.

But as they say, its the experience that counts.

oh wait. nevermind.

:3

[HammerTodd Begins]

Ah revenge

Ah revenge, a cycle that never ends..