Mordoz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Corey&Billiam EP: 1]

very good

lol from your description I ws made to expect complete shit. But after I watched it, it was opposite! ha ha...its a great bit of voice work, yeah mic was not the best, but the mic is only half the quality.

You were either cutting yourself short and being harshly modest, or just ironic and making a joke at your own work.

As for animation, don't beat yourself up on that either. Sure it was extremely limited animation, but you made mouth animation. You didn't make it frozen expression or done the anime flapping mouth bit. You didn't get lazy on that.even if it wasn't perfect, it was EFFORT..that what counts and contributes to real quality in the end.

Once you get the new one, it will be great. I'd definitely use your voice in any of my future work.

I look forward to more of your work! Great job! Allpoints! 5/5 10/10

Croire responds:

Helpful review is helpful :D thanks

[HTBSR ep 2]

fun!

He sounds a bit like Huckleberry Hound lol, awesome

[The Homeless Vagabond]

wow very nice!

Hey I could have used a few cops like that in my neighborhood!

awesome animation

[Death of Freshy]

Wheee! I like it!

Awesome Opossum!

all points!

[TMNT: REBEL 5]

random! wheeeee!

Well that was random fun. Although a bit less random than most random flashes. Blockhead fits in well there.

[Loves Creation]

Pretty nice actualy

I like the story and you at lest had arms and other things in some limited animation. So it counts as one.
I like it, I never heard the story told in that way. Yes indeed the god was acting as a child wanting attention, as all gods in all stories act like. Very childish indeed. The compassion for the child in spite of the god/child attempting to break them apart is very deep and meaningful.

Good work!

Remember: An animation is only as good as its story. You can have the best animation in the world yet the whole thing will suck if its a lame story. As long as you continue and practice, your art will improve natr4ualy as you tell your stories. You made real efforts to amke it good, and you didnyt succumb to the old lazy method of using stick figures as those who never advance in thier art tend to do. They only advance in limnite ways in thier animaton, while you seem to amke real efforts to improve on all aspects of your work.
Awesome job! I look forward to more of your future work!

[Halloween Short Shorts]

why?

So basically you turned perfectly well made works of game and animation into retarded pieces of crap. Pretty much the standard of Ng I guess.

Pie gag is as old AS cartoons..even earlier. ...and still not funny. Might as well have thrown in bananas too.
I prefer the originals. At least that was quality and had real effort..

I'd suggest possibly working on quality, to try to keep to the original spirit of each masterpiece instead of dumbing it into lowbrow boring stuff. Instead of a tribute to each, you created something of an insult to each.
I'm guessing you didn't win on that site.

1/5 1/10 - 1's for what little effort you made.

[All together]

very nice

not really a hidden message. It was plainly understood. Very nice symbolism there.

[Exile Preliminary 4]

Now THIS is a well deserved Daily Feature!

Oh wow awesome work man! Markedly improved quality between each chapter. It's only a matter of time (practice lol) that your quality will rival that of mainstream anime movie quality.

I'm also digging the story. Got me into it big time. Its so rare for a flash movie in NG to really hook me deep like this.

You got something REALLY GOOD HERE

Kudos and keep on making this great story shine.
5/5 - 10/10
CIAO
-MD

RiverJordan responds:

I like this review!

[Don't Miss Her Wedding]

Awesome

I really like giving PSAs as assignments ot my students.
It really brings out better results overall.

(That and music videos, but those tend to bring out the amv's *Shudder* I hate failing those ones lol)

Good work here. While the animation is extremely limited , you really pout home the message in a understandable and clear way. It read like a picture book rather than any feeling of animation but it works for this.

5/5 10/10
Were you my student in animation, you'd get a B :-)