Mordoz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Things Bad Day]

not really up to college standards

This is way below college level quality. Something I would have expect from a 12 year old. Keep at it man. Took me a while to get it barely passable as college level when I went to college.

And yeah its very unfinished. I think under the tos here you aren't supposed to submit unfinished work.

Experimental doesn't mean unfinished.

You can however put it to your personal storage in your account then link to it from your blog. |Then get feedback on unfinished work that way.

[Amazing Fact]

shanazzy!

nice. This has "Series" written all over it. You could possibly do more on your own and slowly eveolve your style and skills on 15 second tidbits like this.

[Sagat's Story]

hm. intersting

Well, you tried.

RunAway5AnimationInc responds:

Doesn't really say what I need to work on so tahnks for nothing.

[The Confused Cop]

You may have got something good here...

yeah yeah, quality and animation not so great..blah blah blah..we all know that improves if given encouragement to make more.

so I would encourage you to go for it1 I like this premise for a plot. a kind of Mr Magoo of the spy world or cop world. I liekd that tyep of comedy when Liam Neeson played the live actoin version of Mr Magoo and all hi other "spy-eske" type of movies...goofy , confused and full of fight!

Awesome start! I hope you make many , many more! improvements happen naturally anyway so I wont pick on you for that like many do. They are jsut too spoiled with their fully produced syndicated trv cartoons....the brats :P

[Super Peoples Pt.1]

awesome-o power!

Oh after seeing this, I am so looking forward to the rest of your work!

Very smooth animation, with various degrees of humor going on, yet kept simple. Nice work man

[Zombiez N' Wool]

nmot bad at all!

hey you made some pretty good effort there! great job man!

As for others refering to Edds world...WTF? not even close.. I can see a clear difference between styles.

No worries there. Just do whatever you feel like doing. I'm sure to like the results.

5/5 8/10

[Everything Black & White]

interesting

While I highly agree with the message (well its reality, so why not)

The presentation needs some work. I ended up not watching and jsut listening. You might want to put some effort into actual animation or else you end up with a radio show instead.

Also, the "insane bible thumper" is a bit hard to understand at times.
If you don't feel much like actual animation, maybe ask someone on NG to do it for you , a nice collab. The concept is worth continuing. It just needs a bit more quality. So Id call this a kind of testing of waters.

Keep on keepin on man!

abstractblond responds:

Yea when making this i realized how to fix the slow, lagging type of animation of the characters so the next one should be better in terms of animation. Plus I didn't bother to edit this for newgrounds, it's also on YouTube, so the next one will be presented in a more proper fashion for this site.

[crazy wagon loop]

WTF do like this?

Seriously. Why the fuck do I like this? Because I REALLY like it!

Awesome loop. I have NEVER BEFORE like any loops on here. Until now. Great job