Mordoz's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ass Track]

Its ok to show nipple when its rated M. It's an artistic nude until there are provocative sexual poses..which this is not. I've seen plenty of art models pose similarly. It' still tasteful.

Awesome job btw! All points to you!

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

Oh I understand, I usually do not censor - but I find it easier to just do it. That way I can post it more places without huge huge controversy. Thank you so much, I really appreciate it. x

[WTD #48 Hand Turkey]

awesomely funny!

I tried tracing a turkey to see what would happen.

The result: Sexy Hand.

My nights are MUCH more fun now :D

Bill responds:

hahaha

[Self-Portrait]

niiiice!

You look very surprised that you did a self-portrait.

Also you look hungry.

Awesome job man!
All points to you!!!

J-qb responds:

Yeah thats like my blank "I'm concentrating on my drawing"-look
thanks!

[Archer]

Looks great!

The proportions DO look fine. If the so called experts put their own arms to their sides, they indeed reach nearly to the knees. So you are fine on that count.

What is throwing some critics off is the armor pieces. One arm looks thicker and therefore visually longer than we are used to seeing. But its fine in reality.
The overall figure is about 6 heads tall..still within the realm of reality. She's just not average female height. Not a problem since everyone are different heights. (possibly an amazon warrior? :D )

The ONLY thing I can see that might be off (aside from aforementioned fetching) is there the grip of the arrow end, Looks too loose compared to the beginning pull. This is a minor thing though since also no archer would begin a pul lthen pause to get her pic taken (painted?)Should be a full follow-through on the pull.

But again, that doesn't matter since this could be the pull-back reaction to a command to cease fire and so in the motion of releasing tension on the bow.

Or none of that bs and simply posing for the great artist.
(often done in ancient paintings, unrealistic poses for dramatic effect.)

What all my nonsensical rambling comes down to is this:

Great Work! No real flaws, great composition! All the points belong to you!

einharjar responds:

Thank you very much kind sir! I will look in to those points in my future endeavors.

CHEERS!

[Balamban Contest 2011]

I like this very much

I was recently in the Philippines (Palawan) doing volunteer teacher work for my step-mother (filipina) and your painting makes me homesick. Yes during my experience there, I have considered the Philippines a second home for me. I love the community and the way things connect there. I miss it already and I'm only back in America since January 18th!

The scene in your painting is so very filipino, a sight seen every day from my office/bedroom window. I would often just sit and watch the people do their daily tasks. I felt good to be there and experiencing as I did.

I had some good memories made there. I will definitely return. I have many friends on many islands whom I wish to visit.

Maybe this time I will actually learn Tagalog! haha!

Full points my filipino friend! 5/5 10/10

einharjar responds:

Thank you very much for the comment sir. Yeah, you should learn tagalog sir once you come back here. :)

[Meaty Boner]

Instant Classic

In both pic and game.

Awesome work man.

Kudos and all the meaty tenderloin steaks of the world to you!

I would tip my hat but you would not see it due to the tremendous fat stack of meat you carrying anyway haha!

-MD

Jazza responds:

lol thanks man

[Ex-Musketeer]

awesome work

Not impossible for such an unscrupulous man. Having been born with joints that bend near doubled, he is able to even use this ability to escape imprisonment.

Ok, I tried it myself. I was able to do it, not THAT far but nearly there. I do have double joints in my elbows, so perhaps he can too and often exercises it without thinking, perhaps freaking out enemies sometimes :D

full points. fantastic work

MORDOZ

<deleted> responds:

Haha indeed, we will have to append that to the character description.

Thanks for the comment :)

[Butterfly Freedom]

Ah ha!

I just finished reviewing your first flash on here and now I see your tyrue artistic abilities laid bare!

I was right, you CAN create very good art. I hope you apply some of this to your flash stories. It would really enhance your work greatly. Either a retelling of your story with human shapes like this picture you made, or a new story.

My hats off to you, young lady! Full points! 5/5 10/10

Cateyes27 responds:

Thank you XD I'm more at home with a pencil and paper though I do like to play in photoshop from time to time. I do have a tablet but sadly it isn't a name-brand and is difficult to deal with along with no settings to change/adjust. I very much want to draw better flash videos and without a time limit such as with my last one lol. (only had a few days)

Again thank you very much for your review ^^

[Beauty and the Beast]

nice image!

"Thank you! I just kinda noticed that they were a little blurry actually! How embarrassing."

Actually the antlers of a fawn (baby dear) are fuzzy. They have a small fuzzy coat of light fur lining it as it slowly grows up from the head...kind of take the skin and fur with it until it breaks all the way through. So its only the ears needing work. But really that's not a big deal. The imagery is there clearly seen

Araelyn responds:

Ahaha, thank you for the facts and I'm glad you like the picture!

[The Fiend Keeper.]

oh thats what it is.

I thought it was jsut fried spider legs he was rolling around in. lol

That guy sure loves him some fried spider legs!

yum!

fun art. good work

Kuoke responds:

Spiders, hands, it's all the same. I sure know I get them confused constantly.